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Keep at it!
Chuck’s feedback was fantastic to read, and it really highlights the level you’ve already reached with this.
I loved your unusual metaphors, the microwave reference works on so many levels.
Subscribed and looking forward to the next iteration.
I’m a humor guy too, so I know where you’re coming from, but trust your gut. If it feels right, then stick with it. I thought the story felt great. What guy going through all that is going to be up for cracking jokes?
Great stuff. Took me along for a ride back to my sturm and drang zeit. We've all had our Leahs.
So glad you decided to post this. Very good work. Use the momentum.
Keep at it!
Chuck’s feedback was fantastic to read, and it really highlights the level you’ve already reached with this.
I loved your unusual metaphors, the microwave reference works on so many levels.
Subscribed and looking forward to the next iteration.
I’m a humor guy too, so I know where you’re coming from, but trust your gut. If it feels right, then stick with it. I thought the story felt great. What guy going through all that is going to be up for cracking jokes?
Great stuff. Took me along for a ride back to my sturm and drang zeit. We've all had our Leahs.
So glad you decided to post this. Very good work. Use the momentum.