Thanks! There’s an updated version linked to the bottom of this based on Chuck Palahniuk’s feedback. New parts and one more character has been added. Thanks for reading!
Well written, nice story. I'm waiting for the day the narrator tells Josie it's not fair on her that he's not over Leah. Ah man, the twenties.... It was the best of times, it was the worst of times.
This is actually the old version. I updated it, but I think there are a couple changes I’ve made and will probably continue to update it. The version I’ve updated (and will continue to update) is linked at the bottom of the story. BTW I’m totally over Leigh/Naomi now haha. At the time of writing the story (end of November, early December) I was not haha. The new version does have some updated events. Everything in this is true, including the newly added parts.
Powerful stuff. Well written. Love can suck sometimes. Hard not to be hung up on Leah types, I feel it-so you wrote her really well.
Thanks! There’s an updated version linked to the bottom of this based on Chuck Palahniuk’s feedback. New parts and one more character has been added. Thanks for reading!
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I'm real curious what Chuck had to say...gotta check this out.
Well written, nice story. I'm waiting for the day the narrator tells Josie it's not fair on her that he's not over Leah. Ah man, the twenties.... It was the best of times, it was the worst of times.
This is actually the old version. I updated it, but I think there are a couple changes I’ve made and will probably continue to update it. The version I’ve updated (and will continue to update) is linked at the bottom of the story. BTW I’m totally over Leigh/Naomi now haha. At the time of writing the story (end of November, early December) I was not haha. The new version does have some updated events. Everything in this is true, including the newly added parts.